What? Iinappropriate?

missecho

missecho

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I tried to enter a story in the Hasbro Monopoly sweep and got this message; Our scanners picked up an inappropriate word(s) in your post. We’re all for creative language but please keep it clean.

Here is the story I submitted, what is the "inappropriate" trigger? Anyone?

Last night I had the privilege of time with my teenage son. It's an unusual and gross story. "We slugged together" Flashlights in one hand and a rubber glove on the other; we crept up on the slimy fat icky critters and picked them from the vegetable garden, plopped them into a "death jar", and saved the cabbage. He loved it, and wanted to go to the neighbor’s yard. The big deal is; more time with him. He's my last, most beautiful child. I'd like to take him to visit his sister (also amazing) or his brother (also beautiful). This could be my gift to him, a trip to see what else the world has to offer; other then the slugs in the garden.
 
Looks like an automated message, though I don't see any individual word that would have triggered it. Perhaps the combination of gross, rubber, slimy, death, slug, and slugged set it off?
 
AH HA! It was the "Slugged Together" comment that triggered the censor. Not sure what that means other than what we did but here is the version that was accepted. Also had to shave words to 75.


I had the privilege of time with my son. We hunted slugs. With flashlights and rubber gloves; we crept up on the slimy fat icky critters and picked them from the garden, plopped them into a jar. He loved it, He's our youngest child. I'd like him to visit his sister or brother. My gift to him, a trip to see what else the world has to offer; other then slugs in the garden.
 
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